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If I Could Turn Back Time

If I could turn back time
every moment I'd cherish

Every word of soft petals
would I speak to you

How oft I hear your voice
and didn't listen when you were near

I'd probably take care
With the times we shared

Oh if I only knew
I'd be filled with dreams of you

Things would not be left unsaid
I would not have to toss  in my bed

In the silent night
I wondered why things didn't go right

Your eyes said it all
If I can recall

But when you speak
You made me very weak

And your gentle touch
I wonder  why I felt it so much

Then I grew fondly of you
and think of all the things we should do

Oh I wish I could see your face
and hold you in warm embrace

But I cant turn back time
But memories of you lives
in this heart of mine


















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  • AndreaChanel
    August 18

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    very relateable...i think many have felt this way before. such a warm yet depressing feeling. a love that felt good but sucks to know it no longer exists. great job!


  • Mr.
    August 18
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    I know the feeling. Good poem.

  • Ilovewriting
    August 17
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    you should enter it in my next contest. Great job chicka. You have a wonderful talent. Keep up the wonderful work. No need for the extra space.

  • Ilovewriting
    August 16

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    I loved it. You don't need no criticism. You don't need to revise it. Its perfect the way it is. Your wonderful at writing poetry. Two thumbs on that one. Keep going on your awesome poetry. No need for ther extra space at the end tho.

  • goodwriter
    August 14
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    Great job. I loved this poem. You have a great love for poetry. Continue you on.


  • DanO
    August 13
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    Nice

  • Eyemperfect
    August 9
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    Lol..liked it specialy da last 2 linez,they hit hme


  • Navajo Apsara
    August 3

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    This is so romantic I really loved your poem. But I cant turn back time But memories of you lives in this heart of mine. Wow I can identify with you the memories always live on no what ifs? its alway to late. Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading.
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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    July 15

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    We often fail to understand

    We often fail to understand the voice of our beloved in time and repent later. You have said this truth in your poem in most descent way.Such is the life and when you tell it I hear it like a beautiful melody. I instantly become fan of your poetry.Bravo.

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