Just a child in the night
No more no less
Laying down to sleep
In her nite time dress
Never knew a place so dark
And a night so cold
As the one in which
Your about to be told
The first time is the hardest
When the snake crawls deep inside
Taking over her soul
Leaving her to forever hide
Laying there that night
Dreaming of fairytales and such
She went away forever
Because he just had to touch
What she was once
Meant to be
Could not survive
This painstaking tragedy
She'll never get to know
What she would have been
If it hadn't been for those nights
in which the snake crawled in
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My soul cries for your understanding speaking the words my lips can not say...
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I felt it..............
The words definitely express the pain....I wish and pray that God gives you the strength to overcome whatever beast brought these feelings to you. You are so much better than ever having to experience that hell. Remember you are loved.

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thanks... i wish too that i could get over this... but it does not escape me...
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I really enjoyed this poem. It was really dark, but well written and made you think. Thanks for that, great job!


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No, we will never know what we could have been. But we can decide who we want to be know and become that. The past doesn't equal the future. I'm a true believer in that, and hopefully an example of it.
Sad and dark write hun, but well written



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gorgeous poem....it almost sounds like something u would hear at the beginning of a very dark tim burton movie.


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thanks.... hugs
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This is a very gut-wrenching poem of abuse. I can sense the pain and feel the loss that this has caused you over the years. You have my empathy.
Mike

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