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I will do my way...

the kite of silken paper.

...silken paper
full of versed vows,
and I will let it fly free
over the waters
to mirror the poetry
of us.

oh! no matter the season,
no matter the time...
if rain washes the ink,
if gusts of wind blow it
above the clouds
still, it will sing
to the world
the words of love
along the string
leading to my heart.

if night and moon
do not bring the light
I will summon the stars
to shine for you.

Author notes

Prompt: 3. Poem inspired by a song - Simon Dupree: Kites

Kites

I will fly a yellow paper sun in your sky
When the wind is high, when the wind is high
I will float a silken silver moon near your window
If your night is dark, if your night is dark
In letters of gold on a snow white kite
I will write "I love you"
And send it soaring high above you
For all to read
I will scatter rice paper stars in your heaven
If there are no stars, if there are no stars
All of these and seven wonders more will I find
When the wind is high, when the wind is high

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hbS2KmEecTo&feature=related

" You are the words to my hearts music "

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  • Thank you for your beautifully spoken piece, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • Time focus on Me
    September 20

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    Veri

    Lovely and wel written. this is gorgeous and amazin. this poem is alsome. love the way it was written n done. u have beautiful talent. keep da ink flowin


  • Ellis gold member
    August 17
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    Lovely


  • Patpowers silver member
    August 2
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    Brightfully composed and well written. Loved what I read here Sonja.THANKS again!

  • I think this is an incredible write. Love the flow and the thought behind your words. Beautiful!


  • jcat gold member
    July 20

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    Oh this was just lovely!! I do believe I sighed longingly at the end! Thank you for your wonderful entry!

  • Oh how very beautiful and a poem that really made me sigh. What amazing inspiration you got from the song.
    Thank you for your tremendous entry
    Gaylene

  • Beautiful, Sentimental Artistry...

    How wonderfully romantic! That must be one very special (and lucky) person, if you "will summon the stars to shine" for them!! Best wishes in the contest!!
    Peace & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • crivanea silver member
    July 16

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    Awww! This poem made me sigh... Melting I to a puddle of goo.... Love this write.. Very beautiful with words as soft and light as the kite.. Wonderful imagery And a great song for inspiration ... Best wishes in the contest


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 15

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    your poetry always echoes and reflects the "poem of us". loved the sense of flight in this poem and what a wonderful word reflection of the quote you've used. beautiful.

    ~ Nicolette

  • mina nagi
    July 15

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    This is simply beautiful... Good luck in the contest...

    mina

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