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Obeying

Obeying his rules
is all what I want

Feeling his tight leash
everywhere I stand

My slavebelly burns
to serve him the best I can

showing my complete devotion
to this strong and loving man

my Master
I love you

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  • mcfreeman
    October 16
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    more submission

    and more submissions


  • LionessK silver member
    July 14
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    welcome to allpoetry

    I like what you have here... fit well into the category and theme. Kind of surprised you used the capital I here.
    Your devotion is obvious either way.
    You need to put this in the "adult" category as well with the picture you have used up there.

    Keep writing and enjoy the site.