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Two Of Us

I want to live inside your head
I'd fill in the gaps and cracks
I'm far away instead
Remind me to relax
I'd fill in the gaps and cracks
The two of us together
Remind me to relax
Things couldn't get much better
Save me from myself
The two of us together
It's so hard to remember oneself
Things couldn't get much better
I'm far away instead
The two of us together
I want to live inside your head
Things couldn't get much better

Author notes

Written for a school project. It's a pantoum poem, so that's why the lines repeat like that. I think it gives the poem a sort of haunting feeling. It almost reminds me of the end of '2001: A Space Odyssey' when HAL starts to lose his mind.

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  • reinventlove
    August 1
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    this is such a neat poem! the repeats make it sound especially cool