Magnificant Breeze..Do I hear These mountains sing? Birds...Happily with the same tone!As clouds float around me..I swear I can touch them...
I feel nothing, weightless.. Beyond, there like the lost feather..I feel anxious!
Here I am.. Arms raised... Ahhhh,High..in..Higher!
Arms wide open..Eyes closed shut!
As tho,Now I feel so free...
Never again, Am I to show soffication. With You there a destination!
Forever lasting........
I dont really know where this came from!! well,Duh!! My head somewhere,this I know,But the meaning I dont think im aware!!Hope you like it!!If You got this far, Now leave a Comment!! Thanks!! :-)
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This is really refreshing!!
I love it and it brought a nice picture to my mind whilst reading it!
I think this poem is quite dream like...
A great write...
Thanks for sharing
And Keep Writing
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this is cool.
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Well done this is really nice
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That was really great!!! I actually enjoyed being in your mind!!! Nice thoughts, I felt also like flying!!!
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Poet
To me, as I read, I remember the wonderful sensation of dream flying. And the true spirit reigns in your words. May we all find such sweet peace in life and death.
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Just fell out of the computer. I love the way you just let it go and went with the flow. It has a naturalness to it this is great to read. Very well done.
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[wowzers]
This is amazing and i love the way it follwed so smoothly. I loved the imagery from this. I love it and such a great read. Brilliant!
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