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The Alley Part 5 (7-1-09)

Something luminescent strikes me suddenly
quickly shading my face
"maybe possibly I can see the reason behind it" I think

In something walks, with an outstretched hand
sensing my hesitation; a calm voice whispered
"It's fine, I'm not going to harm you."

Gathering myself and senses I take his hand
feeling as if everything would be just fine

He led me down numerous hallways
until finally we reached a huge polished wooden door

He pushed it open with ease, leading me inside

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