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The Alley Part 4 (6-7-09)

Awaking blurry visioned and dizzy headed
attempting to recall what happened
and where I was
taking a chance to stand up and take a glimpse at my surroundings

Expecting to see what I had before
to my surprise it all had changed
within, what seemed to be mere minutes? or had it been much longer?

How long was I out, I think aloud
Sighing as I slumped down to the floor
from which I had just risen
contemplating on what I should do...

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