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The Alley Part 3 (5-25-09)

Imagining dangers which were not there
take a breather
and continue on my path
to my safe haven

Walk past the old bleak white washed tavern
not expecting to hear the sounds I did
looking all around to see if anyone was close by
to show if any life was heading inside

Shrugs and continues on my way
reaching the middle of the street
there something lay; bent down, down to my feet
checking he pulse, seeing if it was still living

Suddenly
I see nothing and feel the pavement beneath me

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