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The Alley Part 2 (5-8-09)

Stretching my hand outward
reaching for the closest object
finding the wall, attempting to make myself one with it
the noise steadily getting closer

Holding my breath as if its right beside me
something touches my shoulder
jumped from my not-so-hidden hiding place screaming

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