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The Alley Part 1 (5-7-09)

Walking in darkness with nothing but dim streetlights
to guide me
to a place unknown
raggedy torn down buildings surrounding
safe haven no where in sight

Something stirs up ahead
can't make out what it is from where I am
so I stand still

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