they told us
they removed
eighty five
percent
of the
tumor.
at five o'clock
tuesday
the fourteenth
i will find out
if my mother needs
a second
brain surgery.
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oh
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/jyfnm/
oh, say what you mean
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so honest, and way too sad.
I like the style of the poem, but I'm so sorry you're going through this.
the stream-line thoughts were great and the conclusive simple "oh" gave it even more impact
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brianna i love you.
please be okay you'll be okay everything will be okay.
i'm sorry i can't be there for you to vent to.
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wow...this is different. I really like this. and the way you wrote it. fantastic.
she is going to pull through this
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i love you.
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It was different. I like the whole chain of cussing. lol. It is good though.
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