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Acceleration, 4






water, birds, blinds closing

the night has stolen beauty
into motion

new kisses upon his chest, her hips ~
he tries to resist
                                earth, water, birds, motion


the flowers are still, naked,
woodspirits their drums and flutes sway

shadows of the moon severed at mid thigh whirl away
but he must breathe,
even within this silhouette (this vase)
of the night he must breathe then she will know then she will know


then she will know
                            what she has already been given







 















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  • unraveled
    July 14
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    this is lovely, especially the ending


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 14

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    Of the day, she must breathe. Of the night, she must cherish. Gorgeous, Sweetheart.




  • Envelope
    July 14
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    yes she will

  • Oh! Clappies!

  • Ooooo saucy and naughty right from the start... Another enchanting dance of two lovers in the night. At least that's what I saw when I read... and it was oh such a beautiful dance... you made me feel dirty! But this is sooooooo good. Pen on my friend

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