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Why So Serious?

I suppose it is all my fault
At least, that's what you want me to believe
And I suppose it'll all be okay
If I'm willing to be decieved

Yeah, I know you're feeling bad
at least that's what you want me to think
cause I'm sure the inside of your mouth
still tastes like the inside of her cheeks

Promise that you really love me
That you're not taking our love as a joke
and I promise I'll call the ambulance
right before you start to choke

Oh darling,
why aren't you laughing?
I thought we were having fun
The lying
and all the screaming
Now we'll see who's finally won
The late nights
when simply out of spite
You said I was killing you
Well maybe
call me crazy
if that's what I have to do. . .

Why so serious?

Author notes

I think I might be going crazy.

Basically the guys cheating on the narrator (again) and she knows he doesn't really love her, so she's going a little crazy. She figures if he likes having a good time so much, maybe she'll have some fun of her own. . . Not probably not the way he wanted.

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