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I Will Stay

And so I will walk.
I will walk down this long, narrow path.
Plank after plank passing under my feet.

And so I will walk.
I will continue walking towards the light.
I know what I want most is at the end.

And so I will walk.
I will make it to the end. I swear it.
There is no turning back .

And so I will walk.
I can see my happy ending coming near.
I will take what's mine and smile.

And so I'm here.
I've made it to my prize I longed for.
I see you open up those arms and I am home.

And so I will stay.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    July 15

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    This is great. I love how the lines go from

    And so I will walk

    to

    And so I will stay

    That was amazingly done.



    Riftkin


  • etoile
    July 13

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    good take on the prompt, I like the ending of this and the repetition worked well.

    goodluck and thanks for entering