After knowing each other, washing our bed with passion
I feel like a supernova had bursted forth in the sky
Just above our heads as our Love came as one
Do you not feel the same as I?
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No earthly stimulant could bring me here
Where waves crash amongst the stars
As lightning streaks around trembling mountain tops
And rainbows dance in rivers through the air, running far
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This is us as one at last. This is home.
Where ice and fire, winter and summer, melt into each others arms
To bring forth the spring and autumn rain
That washes us through of all pain and harm
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And we awake to our new dream, reality
The Love that we were all along
Having mended our broken instruments to play in tune
Our long-forgotten, eternal song
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, from astrology to meteorology; that's quite a varied piece. I love these lines:
"As lightning streaks around trembling mountain tops
And rainbows dance in rivers through the air, running far"
I know it's kind of a cliche like the "Ice and Fire" part, but I thought it was placed well in the poem.
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I tend to use a lot of cliche lines in my poetry... but they'll have to suffice until I get better.
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Nah, you don't. And the few you do use fit the poem well, so anyways .....
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