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You wont help me when i ask,
all i needed was one task.
i am scared, you can't hear me,
why cant you just see.
but now i have turned to something new
a way of life that's better too.
it fills a void, makes me happy,
now how can i make you see?
a new one i worship, She gives me strength
to deal with the hardships, gives me some length.
i know you think that this is wrong,
but this is what i have been waiting for long.
i cast my circles and bless Her grace,
She has given me a new face.
i am sorry i hide this from you,
but if you had, you would to.
you would never approve in my new life
but it has cured the best of my strife.

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I wrote this poem about my life now. i have discovered the world of Wicca and it has changed my life. my parents would never approve.

Have you ever changed your life in order to know yourself better

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  • Jessipotts
    October 25

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    it really speaks to me

    i chose to follow the pagan path just over a year ago, but it still seems that people, especially family, still dont take it seriously and understand that its what i believe in. But ahh wells, at the end of the day the paths i chose to take are the choices I make on my own. Blessings x


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    July 15
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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Merry Meet and Merry Part! I am glad you have chosen the same craft I have. It is awesome to be a witch! I have family and friends that don't agree with me, too, but it is my choice and I have found true peace, like I am sure you have found! Keep the faith, fellow witch!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy / Raven
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  • good for you for finding your inspiration in whatever way you need to. I think it says a lot about a person when they are able to strike out on their own where certain issues of faith are concerned! keep on doing what you need to do. thanks for sharing this one. it took me back to a time in my life when I let go of handed down belief systems and found my own voice of reason...peace an dlight, KP