to breathing secrets, underground,
whispering together
to remember themselves~
I thought of you just now
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Wow~
this is brilliant, and holds a lot of feeling
in just a slight handful of words.
Well captured, dear poet.
I wish you all the best;
Andantean Zach. -
Oh my! Have I ever been in this frame of mind for the past week or so. I miss my dad but unearth fond memories when the melancholy of death takes me by surprise. You used brevity as a force to be reckoned with here poet. This is one of those poems that causes the reader sit back in their chair and ponder with a smile. Exquisite!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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Thank you and love you, too!
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Beautifully expressed using so few words. The magic of memories.
Mariana
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This is quite lovely, and I do enjoy short poems very much... profound message in a few lines is very smart to do.
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i love this...when i think of/remember my grandmother it feels like this, people live on in our thoughts..
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this reads like a whisper, in a serene, accepting sort of way. Enjoyed
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yeah, accepting. thank you
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Chenoa, I really like this.
In it's simplicity, it made me stop, think, explore the undercurrents... and feel.
Wow. It's like going about life as normal, and suddenly, something just pops you on the head and then you remember it. Like stumbling across a still-frame outtake of a movie you threw out.
How overwhelming it is, how it floods you... just that one thought.
Love the format here. How the title and all the lines lead into one another.
So glad to see you writing again.
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Thank you, Allie
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I don't know what the first half means, but I don't think it really matters, does it?
What's important is that SOMETHING made you pause and think of someone that obviously has an impact on you. I like it
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