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Emotion Games

Razor blade to the wrist
Maybe death would be better than this
All I feel,
Constant loneliness
No more hope
It wont get better, I feel
Constant pain
Emotion games,
Did no one tell you they kill
Let's be real
You don't want me
You never will
I was just some sick thrill for you
Love was never meant to feel that way
The day you walked away
My heart faded away
These are the last words
I will ever waste on you
Maybe one day
All the pain will burn away
But for now I try to move on
I try to run away
I need another heart to make me whole
Another soul to make me feel
Complete
Not beat
Anything to make me real

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 27

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    Wow the saddness of this love break up I can identify a lot of people can. Its very hard brokenn heart saddness and just want to die I felt that way but what it comes down to is any one worth killing yourself ovr? My answer is no.


  • emily inker
    July 13

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    good job

    this poem is exactly the way i feel on times but you just got to forgive and forget, i guess...
    well done x