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summer dawn

Shafts of pure light piercing the early morning mist.

The light blossoming amidst the foliage

Shimmering in the gentle summer breeze

 

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 13
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    excellent

    Very nice Joe. Touching and soaring. I enjoyed this a lot.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Brian


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    July 13

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    beautiful! you have captured the essence of a summers dawn perfectly! great job poet! keep up the great work. peace an dlight always in ALL ways, kp