Sweet pungent reminder
Vast emptiness, steal my soul
Recollecting and recoiling
Past brought forth
Dreary, damp pretender
Prisoner of hopes and dreams
Taste want behind caged lips
Blind but knowing of the outcome
Things change but stay unmoving
Familiar, though hidden well
Prospects fade as seasons change
A field of living hell
Author notes
Life never changes, its all scenary
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breath takingly swift
all those reminders were not nly sweet but expressed in words that were so carefully chose, oved these helluva lot:
Dreary, damp pretender
Prisoner of hopes and dreams
Taste want behind caged lips
Blind but knowing of the outcome
my personal congrats on a poem so very well done
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very powerful and hard hitting
the venom seems to drip off of every word in this wonderfully dark piece.
so great to read your words again love.
Keep the ink flowing
i love you
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Powerful! I love the emotion that you put into your dark poetry. Words like "pungent" add shock value and grab your readers by the throat. Wonderful!
Love,
Amera
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Taste want behind caged lips
Blind but knowing of the outcome...
These are brilliant words. great stuff and lovely work from the cpmposer.
Slan dolores xx
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thank you my friend
your comments are always appreciated
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