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Upward, Ever So High

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                   a song of freedom

                   from her soul she sings

                   while fluttering about

                   cautiously spreading her wings

                   gliding on gentle breezes

                   she surveys all that’s around

                   ever careful and watchful

                   to shun the hard ground

                    in search of her destiny

                    she finally takes flight

                    with dogged determination

                    to reach unexplored heights

                    everything she sees now

                    is through eyes brand new

                    so as she flies higher

                    the more glorious the view

                    beneath her lie the valleys

                    from whence she just fled

                    while lofty vistas she now sees

                    on wings outspread

                    observant of grand rivers

                    rushing to unite with the sea

                    she marvels at the sensation

                    of finally being free

                   with grace and resolve

                   she lifts her wings and soars

                   singing a sweeter song

                   than ever heard before


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Picture Prompt Contest
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  • Thank You for Your Entry ~

    Absolutely beautiful The rhyming is impeccable and kept me smiling as the flow of imagery locked me in completely - a gorgeous take on the prompt

    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Super sweet image, a great eye catcher for sure. Combined with your artistic ability to create a masterpiece worthy of wrapping the mind around and being drawn in your tender grasp and the vision you have designed for us, your readers. This is just amazing. I love this piece. I am wishing you the very best of luck in the contest.
    ~Midnight Lace


  • TXCowgirl
    July 17

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    WOW! WOW!! WOW!!! I AM SO IMPRESSED BY THIS. THIS MADE ME WANT TO REACH FOR THE CLOUDS AND TAKE FLIGHT. THERE IS SUCH A STRONG, AIRY AURA SURROUNDING THIS AND I JUST WANTED TO GRASP IT FOR MYSELF.
    -TXCOWGIRL


  • TheRealDeal
    July 17
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    Forgive me my forgetfulness. I meant to add these a moment ago.
    JLG

  • TheRealDeal
    July 17
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    This makes one want to soar above the clouds and watch this journey in an up close and personal manner. I feel such a deep sense of freedom in your words and could sense the excitement slowing building line after line. This is a most invigorating piece and one that seems flawless to my eyes. You have taken this to the limits and not disappointed. Good luck in the contest.
    JLG


  • wattle silver member
    July 17

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    A Touchy poem. You still have it. The calmness of your words offer hope and wonder; love and hope; hope and love; gentleness for dreams to grow, mature and take wings. Thank you.


  • who iam
    July 14

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    On the wings of this little Angel your poem takes us on a journey from the concrete steps to a place only eagles dare to fly .
    Beautifully written;pictures from words,captivating from the begining to the end.
    As "she lifts her wings and soars",and "the sensation of finally being free"
    My two favorite lines.


    • Touchof1der silver member
      July 14
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      I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. It means a lot to me to know that my words have been expressed in a fashion that provides meaning to someone besides me.

  • Hey! Really good

    This shows real imagination as you take the picture and interpet it as "achieving" instead of "fear" of falling. Nice glass 3/4 full kind of view of the world. Is this your daughter? Good for you gal! Keep that keyboard busy!

    • Touchof1der silver member
      July 14
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      No, this isn't my daughter Hun, just an image from the contest, but she is adorable, isn't she. I fell in love with the image and saw so many ways one could interpret that "first step". Thank you kindly for the wonderful comment. It made my day.


  • stompsalot
    July 13

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    dreamy

    This is AWESOME!! So beautiful! Flows flawlessly... You are an amazing talent! With the pic and the words, I can't help but relate it to a personal childhood memory... I was a sleep walker and I was about 6 yr old and went sleeping walking out to my Grandma's big porch with all the concrete porch steps in my flannel nightgown --- out into the big open, into my dreams. hmmm. thanks for taking me back.
    blessings, hugs & stomps

    • Touchof1der silver member
      July 14
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      Your comment is what was awesome to me. I appreciate your words more than you can imagine. I can't log in as much as I use to or desire to so when I get the chance to write it's not only a great privilege for me but an amazing feeling to just be able to let the words flow.

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