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You Promised.

You give yourself to
The Demons of your soul
Not even bothering to fight
Anymore.

When did you
Become so weak?
I thought I would have known.
I thought I would have been
The first person to know.

I didnt think that YOU
Of all people
Could fall like this.
You are strong.
At least,
I thought you were.

But
You give yourself to
The Demons of your soul.
You leave us behind
And follow the Darkness
Because it makes you feel
Less empty
Even if only for
A few moments.
You promised that you
Would try to stop.
You said that
You would leave it all behind.

You promised
You'd save us.
But how?
When you cant even save
Yourself.

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  • eatingupyourmind
    November 9

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    this poem kind of reminds me of myself to be honest,
    im supposed to be the strong one
    that one that keeps everyone afloat
    but ive kinda let everyone down lately
    some times its hard


    i loved this.


  • Wo Shi Wo
    September 24

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    wow...

    it's been a while since i have seen your work and this made me think of someone i used to admire......this honestly has me on the verge of tears only cause of a personal expirence......but hey great write...very emptionally bond....


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 14

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    I wish I could help Seth.
    I honest to god do.
    Just keep trying to stay strong, believe me;
    I know how hard it is.


    The same goes for you for what I've been telling him, if you need someone to talk to as well, you've got my email and I'm generally always on here at some point.



    x


    • BrokenBeyondRepair
      August 15

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      Sorry, late reply.

      After a certain point, a certain amount of time.. Its difficult to keep your hopes up. Its f-ckin difficult to stay strong.

      D:< Im sick of it all, dammit.

      • Noir mariposa...x gold member
        August 15
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        I know it is, and also know what its like [from what I know of experience and the basis of what I know of this;] on his side too. I know its difficult; but for him, just ... keep at it.
        Don't give up on him.


        • BrokenBeyondRepair
          August 16
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          -.- Tryin not to give up. Like I said.. Difficult.

          • Noir mariposa...x gold member
            August 16
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            I knows it is.
            I swear Ima gonna come up with Hannah and whoop his ass one of these days. Actually, she can Klap him up the side of the head. She can at least reach.


  • VidaBella17
    July 14

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    (((Hug))) if alright.

    This seems like it was hard to write.
    Very emotional.

    I hoped it helped in writing it out.


  • sophia moonfairy
    July 13
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    ....sadness...

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