Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Deadly Outages (prose (# 4 )

Dear -----,

I bet you don't understand how difficult it is containing an elephant without an electric fence. At the first few shocks, the twelve foot, twelve thousand pound thunder becomes classically conditioned to associate the fence with pain and thus, avoids it altogether. But without power, there might as well not be a fence at all. To roam freely through foreign lands is dangerous as containment is protection from the majestic world of the unknown.

My mind, you see, is this poorly managed zoo of blasphemous optimism. Most keepers are asleep on the job if not mesmerized by the established order of unnatural nature within.

I don't want my thoughts to escape, leading to you..
                                                       

                                                                                  Caitlin
                                                                                                                                                           

Author notes

H o p e l e s s D r e a m s

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • i liked the metaphor here. and the words "blasphemous optimism."

    thanks for entering.