My heart stops.
Tears sting my eyes.
I cannot breathe.
My tounge is tied.
I said I loved you,
You said it too.
And yet she's here
In your bed, in your room.
I run out of there
as fast as I can.
Into my bathroom
with razor in hand.
And when I come out
You're there on my bed
Acting as if
I'm out of my head.
You ask if I'm okay.
Take a look at my wrists.
Do they look fine to you?
You're the reason for this.
Since you said you loved me
I haven't touched that blade.
I've been out of practice
The cuts aren't quite straight.
And to answer your question
No, I'm not okay.
So get the hell out of here.
You've ruind my day.
A contest entry
- Song and Horror movie title prompts (Only rhyme) by Ami.
400 points, ended July 31, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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heyy luv dis poem very emotional nd very good great job keep it up!
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i love this poem its very good and very powerful, i totally understand it!!
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very powerful write with strong words. raw emotion building up to make the boyfriend feel the pain that he seems to not even get close to feeling. it's a shame that after someone that claims to love you sleeps with someone else and you are the one suffering all the pain, not just the emotional but the physical as well.
i truely like this piece and wish you luck in the contest
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Awh, definately could feel the emotion in this, excellent write...
I know the feeling...
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Great take with the song I really liked this
thank you for entering my contest and good luck
-♥Amy♥
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