a lost love chased by kisses
to the wind my breath blows
Searching for your pieces
my only hope is to find,
my place between your lips
where all the kisses I take, I enjoyed
to your eternity my hopes
and emotions rapidly deploys
but only angels of love, knows
where my lost love dwells
my eyes are sore from the tears
that burns my cheeks & filled up the holes
a lost love chased by kisses
to the wind my breath blows
Searching for your pieces
my only hope is to find,
my place between your lips
where all the kisses I take, I enjoyed
Please tell me what you think?
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Sad - Beautiful
As always a gift of your remarkable talent, I hear the saddness in your words.
Yet as usual you brought beauty to this write.
My friend John your writings have blessed, amazed, shocked, and made me ponder.
You have grown and come into your own.
I am proud to be your friend and reader of your art.
Your friend,
~Lisa~
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I learned from the Best
Lisa,
I have learned from the best such as you, and have emerged to equalize my talent amongst the best. I admire you and your work of art and I was inspired by your words knowledge and abilities to encourage a fellow poet was a plus. I have came a long way like you said, but it would have never happened if it was for people like you.
"at the end, time is t he ultimate equalizer in most instances in life, thus living life fill with joy that flourishes in us is a blessing”.
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