sundown
ocean’s roll of fog
over warm sand
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A contest entry
- haiku - seasonal by bridgetjanejone.
900 points, ended July 25, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very gentle feeling created here. I like the "ocean's roll of fog" here - soothing, and a little unexpected, as I was prepared for waves over the warm sand. Lots of senses in play here too - the cooling fog and the warm sunset and sand. Very thoughtful mood evoked.
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gives a nice warm feeling! great job!
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how purdy
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ohhhh!!! i don't believe summerscapes is a areal word..but you made it one in my book ^_^....lovely haiku!..just a poem that reminds me of the weather outside....hot..and foggy..too bad there's no ocean in sight...wonderful write
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lol..
nope it's not a real word
it should be summers capes
but being unique
I like to think of myself as something like a wayward sun
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Ah, what a lovely pic you have penned in this haiku! It is perfect!
Best wishes,
Frogz~
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