Swept away in forces vast
crushed in depths of ever last
drowning in red, sweet divine
sapphire moments oh so fine.
Breath sighs out in surrender
to golden traps that are so tender
with a last leap skipped beat
my heart shivering, admits defeat.
Dominated in simple fashion
sounds remain of graced passion
and new songs, duet shared
by submission to, temptress fair.
Author notes
Prompt 35 - love, sex and music.
Maybe not the music you'd thought of but hope you liked this one.
A contest entry
- LOVE SEX AND music OPTIONS by Treasure 5.
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This is really good I will have to say. This is just so excellent thank you for entering and I want to welcome you to the finals. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read.
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great write! my favorite lines are "with a last leap skipped beat/ my heart shivering, admits defeat." I really like where you went with the prompt
unique, flowing, and upbeat 
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Hi Michael !
A lovely , touching and passionate poem !
Eloquently written and a pleasure to read
on this day , thank you for sharing !
Best regards , Friend Easy
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Hi Michael !
A lovely , touching and passionate poem !
Eloquently written and a pleasure to read
on this day , thank you for sharing !
Best regards , Friend Easy
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This is a poem i realy enjoy
It's got a fast-paced edge to it which adds to the excitement of the poem.
Thanks for entering -
Very sensual and a great thought for this contest.
Thank you for entering and all the best to you with
it in our contest. Take care!
Jeremy0826
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