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Gray


He stole my colors
with his touch.
Washed them
into black and white.

His breath
drained them out of me;
with ecstasy.

He left no room
For red
or blue
Or other hues.
As his fingers
possessed me.

He thrust
the deepest shades
into oblivion;
as I gasped
and moaned
beneath his lust.

Or was it love?

He burned me.
Down to ash
and swirled
the little left
of dark and light
into a flawless shade of gray.


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  • LionessK silver member
    July 29

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    I absolutely love your last stanza. At first, with the first stanza I thought this was a sad write but I see now what you meant.
    An excellent and interesting write.
    Thank you for entering my contest.

    Best of luck to you.

    ~Kristy