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Certitude

The beat in my blood
is the heartsong of creation
'canted in Gregorian basso harmony
with the swansong of existence.

Verse, chorus, verse bridge
chorus. As long as each begins
I can still be sure, at least,
that it will end.

It's the same with days. If
with any certainty
I can say that today has begun,
then so may I say that this day
will end and
the next will come in turn,

until it doesn't.

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  • arafura
    July 12, 2009
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    I like this! Very well written indeed.