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Tender Gait



Alas, thy lower limbs set forth painful decree...

Bound and ply-ed tender ligaments strapped as bow
beyond proper scope. My gait is effete, slow with limp
and slurring steps.

What not have I done?
I have stretched with daily routine,
exercised moderately,
and even received remedial massage.


Still comes the torturous binding pin pushing pressure.

Return back 15 years please...

I shall take the necessary steps to
correct the injuries of past lives lived.

or is it 30 I need...

A contest entry

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  • Fay
    July 23

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    im very sorry i didnt comment, i thought i had. this reminds me of several diseases. the poem, tho not long tells a great story. i think as we get older many of us greave the things we lost and and regreat the things we did to harm our bodys. thank you for entering my contest.