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remembering

remembering  things that once was so great.
all i have forgotten ,and things that i wish i could remember.
remembering the laughter of a child.
or remembering a person's smile.
as i sit in this corner wondering where i really should be.
just wanting to remember who i once was.
a child,someones lover ,or a mother.
who am i realy as i sit in this corner,
trying to remember things that once was so great.
just longing to remember those good old days.
and trying to remember who they are as they pass me by.
as they smile at me,who are they.
as i sit in this corner of the world try not to forget
the things that once meant so much.
remembering things that once was so great.

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