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Feelings Lately

Crippled
With a healthy body
As sponge eyes seek previous heros
Only seeing their sins
Drip from fingers tips

Causing my spirit to crack
Like weathered rocks
Letting my soul wonder out
Growing like moss

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 21

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    intresting descriptions here. and its pretty short, but it leaves the mind to wonder more, i like that, take care!
    Stephanie ♥


  • Andrew Jerrell
    July 26
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    "As sponge eyes seek previous heros, only seeing their sins"... Wow.

    Thank you for all the comments you have left me over week, btw. It means a lot to me.


  • Nickelspring gold member
    July 20

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    I love the imagery here especially the second stanza!
    Nicely done
    K

  • Bob Fox
    July 19
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    Poet

    and as the soul grows so does the spirit. Happy writing young poet.