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Licks in 6/8 Time (18 +)

silky strands of titian hair
lie across the pillow, where

scented lilac petals,  press
caressing, your naked chest 

black lace garter belt
felt by probing fingers

eager to unfasten white
satin thighs with
trembling eyes

fixed
upon your rugged arms,
your amber glow of

longing

swirls of red curls
tucked inside

black
fishnet stockings

warm, moist, velvet
petals like

liquid, cocoa butter
melt with wild

anticipation;

honey drops of dew,
spread pink lips apart

to swallow the
rise of you...

subtle summer breezes
push through wind blown
curtains

moonlight
lingers over

alabaster shoulders,

white eyelet chamisole
straps, fall, exposing

firm full breasts
hard like cherry nipples

push up
below the snap

of cellophane
unwrapping










Author notes

Hello there down under where, Mr. James R,

I'm passionate in everything I do from love making to sharing
ideas, to sharing life's deepest moments with heart and compassionate listening; the greatest gift we can offer, anyone.

Your AP family is huge. I'm just beginning to build one. If you'd like to wed and leave the rest unsaid, your profile sounds like you greatly appreciate and cherish a beautiful
heart as well as a woman who knows the art of listening, I may be your next AP choice
for wife.

I'm intensely honest, straight talkin'. I write music and sing. Dancing and music and writing and acting and spirituality are my passions. My mood: Live life at risk, 24/7.

Friendships are priceless and precious and require tender care just like a flower garden

Wishing you success in your search for your next good-hearted, AP wife.

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Comments

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  • aychellus gold member
    November 8

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    this is fine work indeed! the pictures running through my head are extremely erotic but with a deft sensual touch, i applaud this wholeheartedly. well written well done!! i retire now for a cold shower i think!!

  • Oh wow...you did a marvelous job with this, it's very sensual and sexy. Congratulations on your gold trophy and thanks for posting your writings here to share with us all. Keep up the great writing!


  • laura0757 gold member
    October 20
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    I enjoyed this very much,,,,,,,,,,,,in my own words..............hot...........loved it....


  • Dryad Enya
    September 20

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    Well well well, what a genuis you are. I can see why it won gold as well, most often I can't because peice that are rubbish always seem to win!**!

    You are very creative, your passion shows in your work, it is dreamy, fantisful and I am in love with it. It is a work of art, credit due where credit given. You are super and I can't wait to read more of your work. In all honesty I think your stunning to be able to write like that.

    Well done indeed!
    Dryad Enya

  • laura0757 gold member
    September 13

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    wow, what a hot, sensual, poem, I myself have written things of this nature.
    but have never had the guts to print it.......but you go and keep writing, I enjoyed it very much and I love black lace...............lol.....................


  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    September 12

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    ++ imagery : )

    No wonder James R. chose you as a wifey;
    I'm glad that this was not disgusting-erotic; in fact it was beautiful and descriptive and I love the way you interwove colors into this enchanting piece. Great work!


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 6

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    The rhyme, casual and refreshingly incidental, engages me. The piece is intense, hot. This is a fine piece, I think. and I like it a lot.
    Thanks for writing it.


  • Knight70 silver member
    August 1

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    James R. chose wisely.

    This is one of the best erotic pieces I have ever read. What I love about your work is how every word is so carefully chosen. Each line gets the utmost tender care with your pen. I need a cold shower after reading this.

    Don

  • Ahhh this is whom my Jamie picked as an AP wife -
    I approve


    Yay!
    Congrats on Gold and marrying a hella gorgeous man


  • artis
    July 14

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    sin-copulated rythms, tight skin stretched and gently pummeled

    hips bent above the limbo of passion, eyelashes close, tongue lashes rise, a pink reed is encapsulated and soprano wails burst forth, till flesh is slapping much like hands together, but so much more than applause, as he gives you a standing ovation, writes a flesh column in review, and impales you on his dressing room dooor, for such a lovely peek at the feminine side of being a cunning linguist.~~~lol~~loved this~~~Artis


  • James R
    July 13

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    Wow bit lost for words you have done an amazing write my friend and had my eyes glued to the screen from start to finish

  • Oh how wonderfully erotic and steamy!
    A much sizzlin' piece for sure!
    How could James R NOT want you as his AP wife?
    Wishing you the best!

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