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My Left Side Has Never Felt So Dead

You're colourful.
And like a butterfly you've been flying away -
you don't even realise you're life is deteriorating.

You've got something,
no blemishes or flaws, but beauty.
I'm colourless, I paint on your patterns.
I want to have your wings.

Never owned beauty,
never loved, never been a fascination,
by man, who love you so.

I have little tears, little bruises,
from where you've had it all -
the sun light,golden nectar.
the vibrancy.

I kept things from you -
you've taken all my colours,
i hoped you wouldn't take this love.

You did.

I've never felt so ripped apart.
My wings flap and wail frantically.
My left side has never felt so dead.

Author notes

I've never felt so down. I can't say much- I don't know if my friends read it or not.
But lets just say I'm pretty gutted. When someone is hurting you and they dont even know, but if you say how you feel, you're gonna hurt them. Oh God, this hurts so bad. Oh God, I can't breath.

If you reallly wanna know the story just ask.

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  • BeccaBee
    October 17

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    :O

    babess....i looove you

    i wanna know the story!! dont feel bad!!! tell me wots up hunn x.x.x.x

  • It pains me to see you so upset.

    I'm happy to see you're back, though. I've missed your writing.

    I've never felt so ripped apart.
    My wings flap and wail frantically.
    My left side has never felt so dead.

    It paints such a beautifully hearthwrenching image of a butterfly with one wing ripped off... I love and hate the picture you paint. It illustrates such skill and artistry, but also such pain.

  • "I'm colourless, I paint on your patterns.
    I want to have your wings."

    those lines are so incredible.

    i really hope everything gets better for you.
    <3

  • This is really beautiful. The imagery and powerful-ness of the words, are just.
    Amazing. You really made a great piece. Wonderful, wonderful job.