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Lightning




lightning cracks
eggshell sky
newborn rain


haiku

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  • mysty rain
    October 28

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    Awesome!

    I love haiku and this is one of the best I have read. I can picture in my mind's eye the lightning streaking across the sky as the heaven's open up with a new rain fall. A very vivid description. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain

  • Bruce silver member
    September 30
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    Excellent!

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    July 12
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    Such a vivid description. Very nice.......

    Lady D