Don't you realise,
That the love that I feel for you,
Has hidden your lies?
From rising to the surface,
But I no longer see you with blinded eyes.
From since the beginning,
You have made all the mistakes.
You've been keeping all the secrets,
All your lying and your cheating.
I must applaud you,
You played you're part flawlessly,
Making me feel like this love was too good too be true,
Having me focus on fixing all My faults,
So that I could keep You.
You should be the one counting your blessings,
Others would die to be in your shoes,
Clearly you're taking me for granted,
No more tears or suffering.
Ps
There is no truth in your promises,
Your lies have pierced me.
Your words have no meaning,
I can no longer trust truly,
Love has no feeling.
Please tell me what you think honestly
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Exceptional
This is a timeless tale, but it's great that you have the strength to go your own way.
You have a great command of words, and your poem flows really well! This was awesome! 
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