Error of my ways is filled with lies
Posted up smiles and bottled up anger
I cry with bottled up tears flowing like a sstream
Will you help me?
You lied to me
I THOUGHT YOU WANTED ME
I cryd for you
You let me down
It was all a game?
To see if you could destroy my heart?
I hope one day you will love me
As I try to make a new start
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i loved this poem but in the fisrt stanza u should explain a little more or make it clearer
anyways luv it!!!
~yen
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Within the journey good for the book
This is very well written and as you go along your journey of life know that things such as this ghappens for a reason .Often it is so you will find that soul mate that is watching you that you havent given a chance to let her speak her mind . The one who does care for you and so want to be with you not the one who walked away .Often we get hung up on one person thinking their will never be another and in doing this we refuse to see the very one that is our match right within reach . The old saying if you love someone let them go if they return then you will have the answer .But often when one leaves one for another and then that one jilts them they will come running back to what is familiar . In this case never fall for their acts for as soon as they reconcile with the other off they will go again . Your heart only you can protect from this pain move forward nd fnd one who truly knows what love is and your life you shall regain
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what was lied about what was promsied to you, i thoguht it was a great poem just needs more explaination.....i love your poems keep writing....much <3 scars.
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srry but that is private
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angel warrior
i love this poem, it's nice but very sad and I hope u will feel better and make an new start.
sincerly,
angel
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You know why I wrote this poem
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oh wow...way happend today...who is this about??
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