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The Golden Sun

Children play
on the green grass.
They chuckle and cheer
as they score a goal.



[CHORUS]
Summer,
the time of fun
in the golden sun.
Vacations and parties
are the priorities of this time.



Whether it be a camping
trip or an journey to France,
it's all good fun
and a marvelous blast.

The birds chirp in their
wooden homes. Eggs crack
and hatchlings emerge into
a magnificent world of wonders.

Author notes

Summer is a nice time for holidays[vacations].

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  • Soft-Rain gold member
    October 12

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    Had to read this one as it is freezing here this morning! Glad i did made me feel warmer just thinking about summer.
    Loved the happiness in this you filled my morning with joyful thoughts!

    Well done
    ~Lisa~

  • This is so happy. I like the time of fun in the golden sun. That is so pretty.


  • MsPain
    July 21
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    nice...

    its a great way to point out the best things about summer...
    nice one

    *MsP

  • ricachic gold member
    July 19

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    Nice observation of summers joys. Too many times we look past what is right in front of us and it needs to be pointed out.
    Good work Jordan

    Rickl


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    July 19

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    Today's Featured Poem!!!

    Summer time is nice, although I prefer Autumn, where it isn't hot or cold...I am featuring this for today's poem, to share with everyone else in the group!

    Blessed Be,
    ~Raven

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