If only you knew
Just what you mean to me
If only there was a way
That I could get you to see
You make life worth living,
When I don't want to keep going
You do so much for me
Without really even knowing
To have a friend like you is a rare find
So loving, so patient. so understanding, so kind
These words cannot express what you truly mean to me
With you, I don't have to hide
I can be who I was meant to be
Author notes
This is about one of my very best friends who unfortunately decided to take her life on july 12th 2009. I love and miss her very much so I decided to write this in her memory. R.I.P Kristen
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Comments
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this is such a touching piece; very emotional and heart felt; i could tell that you just let this pour right from your heart and that is what makes this poem so unique and special compared to many others on this site : )
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i know the feeling C"=
very moving piece, the emotions here are raw and tender. lovely job with this write.
bravo and thank you for entering
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I like this write unfortunately this breaks my first rule as the contest by Kathraina isn't judged yet therefore not ended. Sorry to DQ.
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Though her life was short, she gave to you something most precious, a small piece of her heart that will carry you throughout your life I have a best friend that is much like yours and I couldn't make it without him at times. He knows me better than I do sometimes. Take the love and empowerment your friend gave to you and spread it wide. Good luck. Rose
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I'm sorry for your loss! this is sad, but you have beautiful memories of her...
karen
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This was good. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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wow ~ that is beautiful. your friend sound so very special. you are lucky to have each other. karen
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Aww, this is so incredibly sweet!
Lovely dedication to your friend. I have a friend that is the same for me.
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Bravo and thank you for entering
♥ Kate
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Love it
Very pretty, the flow is a little messy but hardly noticeable with the sincerity and care that flows from this poem. Thank you for the very lovely entry. It was beautifully done.
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"Weekend Hugs"
What a beautiful write for you very special friend I know they will love it! Beautiful imagery and emotions throughout. I so enjoyed reading. Here is a big hug from me to you. Have a wonderful and blessed weekend, hugs Theresa
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