The creaks flow
with a melody,
slowly meandering
inbetween pebbles.
[CHORUS]
Cherry blossom blooms
on trees. Blossom
decends like light
feathers adding to
the natural beauty.
Spring is a time
of rebirth and
it is full of beauty.
Flowers open up
to the world
and baby fawns
open their big, beautiful
eyes to see the remarkable
wonders of nature.
Author notes
Spring is such a beautiful time of year, just like every season. Spring is so full of life.
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Sakura, Sakura. I love cherries!
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How sweet your words for the season of renewal, for I too might well find myself in the springtime of my ending.
I like it, I like it so!
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Well I applaud you for the right reason
But Autumn remains my favourite season
Even the beauty of a new born fawn
Would seem more wonderful on Autumns dawn
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Nature is such a beautiful thing, I love the sights, smells, and sounds of spring, it is like the rebirth of life, as you have said here in this piece. You have done a wonderful job capturing the sweet simplicity and beautiful-ness of spring time. Very well penned. I especially liked the first set of lines about the water flowing inbetween the pebbles, I love creeks and water and such. Great job. Thank you for sharing.
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This is truly well-penned, a wonderful description of spring!
Bravo!
Nela
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Wow! This is cool! very sweet indeed, I love the baby fawn opening its big eyes to see the wonders of nature! Very very nice! Tugging on my heart strings there!
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