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diving in the big blue sea

I’m just diving in the big blue sea,
I’m feeling weightless like a bird flying,
Using my muscles and feeling strong,
I’m going through the water,
Like a warm knife through butter.

I’m feeling high like the highest mountain,
I’m like an eagle flying high in the sky,
I’m fast in the water like a racing car on Le Mans,
Just feeling high and joyful,
Enjoying life and breathing with ease.

I’m resting in myself and the outer world,
Really sees that and respond to it,
I’m going forward with the speed of light,
No one can stop me when I’m in this mood.

Trying to relax but that’s no opportunity,
Some are trying to slow me down,
But that’s impossible.

I don’t know exactly where I’m getting my energy from,
But there are a lot of opportunities,
Maybe from my girlfriend or from the food I’m eating,
Or it could also be my positive mindset,
That dictates my success in my life,
Properly the most logic answer there is.

My power has no limits what so ever,
I can’t fly but I can run faster than ever,
My breaks is out of order,
So if anyone gets in my way,
I will run them over in the middle.

The strange thing is that I’m not evil,
I just love speed and controlling it,
Being the master over 80m/h,
There’s nothing stopping me.

It’s scary not to have control,
That’s why people gets killed in traffic,
Many people doesn’t have control over speed,
But I have because I control how fast I’m driving.

Psychos aren’t born they are raised,
Human race can’t be born mentally ill,
Things that they have been discovered in their childhood,
Decides of a person gets mentally means.

Just sitting at the beach and looking over the water,
Just set the thoughts free and that’s really healthy,
Sitting in front of the television or the computer all day long,
Keeps the human brain locked up in its own prison.

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just siting in the water front with a peace of paper and a pen.

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  • lilrose
    July 20

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    i know and understood some part
    but not this part

    I don’t know exactly where I’m getting my energy from,
    But there are a lot of opportunities,
    Maybe from my girlfriend or from the food I’m eating,
    Or it could also be my positive mindset,
    That dictates my success in my life,
    Properly the most logic answer there is.


    • Supertramp gold member
      July 21
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      i don't know where i'm getting my energy from,
      maybe from my girlfriend og the healthy food i'm eating,
      or it could be my positive thoughts,
      that dictates the success i have right now,
      and i believe it's the right answer.

      did you know understand?

  • this is quite good! a great escape for the reader. thanks for taking me along for the journey. i enjoyed your write very much. keep that ink flowing! i'll be back for more. peace and light, kp


    • Supertramp gold member
      July 14
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      thank you very much - lovely when someone love one's writing :-)