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A Late Promise, Is Better Than Broken (Shannon)

I close my eyes...
Just to get a glipmse of the sky
The world seemed so vacant and inviting
With curiousity we fell from the sky with vibrant colors..
Sought for a better life..only seemed to worsen as we landed

Ripped apart by unknown forces...
With covetess hands they grabbed us..
Losing all memory..and finally starting over

We found eachother across the nets of oppurtunity
and the lines of confabulation
While the lights on the wings and the smoke beneath the wheels
keep us apart..
We kept that unique bond, of hope, and yearning flame..of what if

We were gullible to think others like ourselves existed
..in a world full of disgust and prejudice, nothing good could come from them..
It is only by us as we stand, though not physically together..the bond we have forged can never be disconnected..

I am struck with pain and guilt
You, an avengeful soughtered sadness

Stuck in a pit, with nothing left to give
but our unrelenting love..to whom we have yet to pass on..without it being destroyed and spat on...

Our relationship has been turned upsidedown by affected decisions
between these walls of entrapment closing in us squeezing the life out of us..
Screaming until theres nothing left to give but our instant thoughts of truth within ourselves...

Many points have been struck with pins and needles
Sewn back together with retalliation
Putting up more walls of solitary...

So weak and powerless....without you

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  • Ishillia
    July 14
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    • Acronym
      July 15
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      ..........

      please dont, that has no relevance to what Im explaining.....yeah we definitely need to talk about this when your ready...and I know that you think I' lashed out at you ...but really I wasnt...everything I said would've been in a calm tone...I just dont want you to lash out at me..when we do talk...it helps