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one basket

never put all all your eggs,
into one basket.
you just might end up,
in a casket.
gollyy! and gidddy-up to!
what do you do?
hopefully you survive.
but pray for death,..
just remember though,
only the good die young.
gusess i'll live forever.
never say never.
i'm just trying to get through this day
what can i say?
but I DO LOVE easter eggs.
and i do crack them crack them carefully...


gypsyfish

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  • raw love
    August 13
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    miss ya, love n' hugs.

    • gypsyfish
      August 19
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      raw love

      and i do miss you to. hey lil' baby, whats up? glad you read my write. thanks for taking the time for me. xoxoxoxoxoxoxo love gypsyfish


  • Fire Storm
    August 11

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    full of wisdom

    your words here sweety say so very much, to which I can relate to so very much since I constantly place all my eggs into one basket and many time they get cracked,,blessings of light,laughter and love,,,Firestorm