the eagerness
of those enamoured
enriched,
empowered
as credence
indoctrinates the hour
it feeds the fatal flower
that within the blast
of blooming brilliance
is devoured-
death in the detonation,
dancing in idealism's cloud...
Author notes
25-50 words
A contest entry
- Are you up for a quickie? by AutumnGypsy.
700 points, ended July 12, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment/Critique if you wish
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Yep - defin. going to add you to my favs.
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I have truly missed the magic of your words and you shine with mastery and profound brilliance here. the passion the fills your pen exudes from your soul. well done my dear friend and many blessings always xxxx
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Congrats on the Silver!
Love your work - full of depth, rich wording and well-done alliteration.
Nice job!
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Very Nice
Darling you are definitely a surprise...I have read now two works you have penned that I adore, knowing just reading a few times is not enough...I like that you gift me… no let me state require your reader to take a second look a worth while one at that my heartfelt thank you for this beautifully penned thought provoking piece. Simple raw with that edginess I love…Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Lady E
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Congrats on Silver!
Amazing brother!
The need for love does tend to make one want to devour,
at what cost do we cost ourselves to rush the idealism.
As all readers see something different in each writing, this is how i took
these words.
Could be i myself long for what i never had. Yet i shall wait to be empowered.
smile..
Like i said this is only my own interpation.
Love
sis
~Lisa~
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Congratulations on the Silver
I've missed your words - though that is my fault for not coming back more often -
love this
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Outstanding says it all Rob. I can only echo Gypsy's comment.
Good luck in the contest
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Wow this is just outstanding, You captured all I had hoped would be caught in this prompt, well done. Best to you in the contest
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