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The Rose

It means many things
Happiness, love, joy
It can also mean
Sorrow, death, hurt

Think about it for a while
You will see the beauty of this flower
Not only beautiful
Because words can't describe it

Author notes

It just popped in my head. I know it isn't really good.

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  • Ez Writer silver member
    July 22

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    Hi Page !

    This poem is as beautiful as the rose
    and as the rose , words can't describe it .
    A splendid write thank you !!
    Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy

  • You're Wrong

    I think the poems that just randomly pop into our heads are usually the best as far as displaying our true inner thoughts and feelings. Not so much emphasis should be put upon 'good' or 'bad', but think of it as, "ok, are these genuine and uninhibited thoughts put together prettily, or am I trying to please others with pretty words that are half way meaningful?" Make sure it's genuine, then it will always be good, dear!


  • kira1115
    July 12

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    Simple, but very good.
    Of course you don't think it is good, everyone is their own worst critic.
    Keep it up, and don't let your ebil little critic out of your head!!
    Kari

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