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a divide in our hearts the choice ours

Here we are again

Will we always come back to this road

Again we just return to where we've been

Are we strong enough for our hearts to be blown

Or shall we at last take a different path?

Will we finally stay in love

Or will we leave in wrath

Never to return in one final shove


A contest entry

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  • prankstar
    July 15
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    A little short but it sends the message. Very beautiful. Thank you for entering^^

    ---prankstar

  • This is really good. I really love this. This is the questioning that seems to just sit in my mind all the time. This is the thought process that many have before deciding to go back or move on... This is good. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you.

    ♥AllYoullNeverHave