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Reality fading

Like a dagger made of light
My life ends unceremoniously
For I have been a villain
That cares little for sanity

Struck down like a dog
Flaundering in a puddle
Howling like pure evil
My life starts to crumble

A deserving event
That demands little attention
As I fall into the abyss
No room for correction

Do not cry for me
As I will not miss you
And soon I will just cease
Cease to exist among the pure

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  • myrataal silver member
    September 1
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    We do not ever cease to be ...

    and for existing among the pure? Those pure pure ...



    Love
    Myra


  • myrataal silver member
    August 13
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    You should write more often ...

    I do miss your cryptic poetry and your probing pen.

    Blessings and prayers.
    Myra


  • myrataal silver member
    July 18

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    Your poem simply tripped me ...

    until I sat flat on my behind, waiting for the world to end.

    What a brilliant way to say: I am done.

    Love
    Myra