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I am sorry

I'm sorry if I am always out in space
when I am most needed.
I am sorry that I am not perfect
because only thing I ever want is to be PERFECT for you
I am sorry if I am not what people expected
but what they expected was wrong
I am better then that.
I am sorry I cry at night for the ones I have lost
because I need to be strong for you.
I am sorry for everything I have hurt you with
Because I never want to loss my best friend for it.
I am sorry for saying sorry too much
But if I don’t and I do, do something wrong
And you don’t tell me, then at least you know..
So if all I say is sorry let me say it a few more times
Just to show I really am
I am sorry, I am sorry, I am Sorry
I am sorry for everything I have done.
Please just understand, I am trying to be better, FOR YOU.

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    September 6
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    This is a really great poem, i loved it and can relate.
    Really well written and i liked it. Great job!
    -Sennyo-


  • xxxfallen angelxxx
    July 12
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    wow. ur poem is really captivating.