Her silhouette tip-toed across
The early morning sunrise
As her outstretched-fingertips
Softly grazed the sky
Author notes
Prompt/Picture Credit: http://www.funxite.com/media/9268-loving-whisper.jpg
A contest entry
- Prompt XX by crivanea.
400 points, ended July 16, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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tiptoed across the early morning sunrise..love that line
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wow...that's stunning!! enough said..this is one gorgeous write! ..love where you take the prompt..soft..short..and sweet!..mysterious..calming..a pure picture prompt perfection..nice job
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Thank you so much
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aww i like this one its beautiful.
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glad you liked it ♥
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Amazing
Another wonderful write by you. I am truly falling in love with your poetry. So short yet full of so much, whether it be emotion or imagery or metaphor or even all three. You have such an amazing way with words, always expressing so much while saying so little. Love the perspective you give to dawn here, as if it were a woman reaching out for something, lika lost love for example(just my take of course). Anyway great write as usual and please, keep it up. Look forward to reading more.
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forgot the clappys!!
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a good piece, just had a look then at the picture, a soft and smiling poem here that dances through light.
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WOW
This is definitly short and sweet.
It leaves me satisfied, yet wanting more.
As do all of your amazing poems! -
as always my sweet beautiful sweet younf friend this is anotherrt brilliantly painted beautifully written poem from you and I
the way you posted this write and really love the prompt behind this write as well. overall this is just one remarkable well penned write from youand I won't be suprise dif you plac ein this contest. keep up the incredible work sweetay as it make sme smile and feel a twinge better. 
ya later =)(+ bes tof luck with the contest
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